To an investor you have never met, who does not know you are raising.
Subject[Company]: [what you do, in six words]
Hi [first name], I'm the founder of [Company]. We [what you do, for whom, in one sentence]. I'm writing to you because you backed [portfolio company] and [portfolio company], which are close to what we're building. [One number that proves it is working: revenue, growth, customers, a pilot.] We're raising [amount] for our [stage] round. Here is our deck: [your tracked link] Would you be open to a 20-minute call next week? Best, [Your name]
- The subject says what the company is. Investors scan subjects; a clever one reads as a newsletter.
- The second paragraph is the reason for writing to them and not to everyone. Use the opening line finder above.
- One number, not five. Pick the one that would make you open the deck.
- One ask, and a small one: a call, not a commitment.